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Hearken to the place of sweet seduction,
Where life is but another breath away.
And life within is short in coming down
To whisper in the airy-bridled day.

Where is thy touch O Maiden of my Dreams?
Swept away in the tempest so shrouded
Full of doubt, or so the enigma seems!
Chaste intentions now flounder assaulted.

A tapestry hangs unraveled by none;
Threatened by its unassuming presence.
Beauty unmatched for eons save the one:
Now my heart surges to her reluctance.

But what is this turmoil breeding, my love?
Innocence endureth - praise God above!
©2006-2009 ~Uel-Kun
:iconuel-kun:

Author's Comments

You'll notice it is written in the style of the Shakesperian sonnet. This is the result of an effort for 50 bonus points in my Senior English class. I received 48. The other two were subtracted needlessly, and this remains my proudest work.

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:iconzoemarlene:
This is the first Uel-kun-poem I read! It's awesome. ^^

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~ Zolene Angel
:iconsan-hayashi:
Hey, awesome work. And same for me (that it's the first Uel-kun poem read).

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私はサンです。
:icontrueloveisorange:
This makes me kind of sad.

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We judge ourselves by what we feel capable of doing, while others judge us by what we have already done.

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August 13, 2006
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